|Poetry from yours truly|
Quatrain IX'Tis the ending of spring, the new dayQuatrain IX by shehrozeameen
Starts with the migration to the sea
Know, my friends: greatness will come your way
So will we - it is fated to be
A Love VignetteI see in your eyes, heavenly repriseA Love Vignette by shehrozeameen
I smiled, so did you, your dreams coming true
A whole day to spend, with a guy who made bends
to be your white knight, to be the white light
We walked in the park, together embark
holding hands we would, walk as if we could
we're both two whole parts, we're a work of art
Together we'll stand, just as life had planned
I saw you smiling, your eyes were shining
like dew in the morn, or a necklace worn
by you; you were alms, as warm as a psalm
that keeps me alive, completing my life
the sky was all blue, a bright azure hue
I found in you, three, blinding fantasies
the first was a dream, of bells tolling streams
of joy to the Earth, for a couple's berth
the second was love, alas 'tis a dove
that flies so far off, in a flight so soft
the third was a peace, a musical tease
As I watch you grow ... my dear heart, I know...
Now before sunrise, Alas I must rise
And bid you farewell, for Fate saw us dwell;
through this green pass, at the station 'las
|Poetry from yours truly|
To the StarsOh Aries my friend,To the Stars by shehrozeameen
Who shines brightly over this nighttime sky and carries the messages of my spirit, my love, and my tender risings to the heavens. To the heavens above, there awaits the beckoning of the light shining out that I may be a part of it, that I may become part of it - united, as one, I will be complete, I will become a totalitarian absolution of the salvation that was meant to keep me going further, if not further than what is meant to be done. Herein lies the depth to which I would go, wherein I would die without the emptiness dwelling in the that speaks out the voice of the soul within.
My friend, Aries, we are lost - we are not meant for this world when the Sun has set. For Saturn has bestowed itself upon the brink, calling out Venus in a reluctant alliance. Yet, we are meant to believe. We are meant to continue our lives as we pursue this search, this pursuit of happiness... For that is why Sheratan shines so brightly over the sky, blessing me with your eyes. Your eye
|Short Stories from Yours Truly|
|My Quatrains in the Rub'iyaat format made famous by Edward Fitzgerald.|
Happy Reading <------- he's a pervert.
Critique Department Update: Critic Openings!EDIT: Duties of Critics have been added in this notice. Thanks fernknits for pointing that out. Appreciate it.
Hey Everyone! My name's shehrozeameen and I recently became the new Head of the Critique Department of PoeticalCondition.
This was an administrative decision taken by our boss RiseandBe. I'm succeeding NotenSMSK, who started the critique department. A gem of a boss honestly - punctual, very dilligent in his approach, and particular about how the department was being maintained. Suffice to say, life is more than dA in the end.
Me and NotenSMSK keep in touch outside of dA, so rest assured he's doing well and is in good health - but he's become busy post-graduation due to a job and other non-dA related exercises which require his fullest potential. It was a mutual decision from all three sides.
And thus, ladies and gentlemen, I have something big to tell all of you:
WE HAVE OPENNINGS AVAILABLE FOR NEW CRITICS!
Commissions OpenName of commissioner: shehrozeameen :iconshehrozeameen:and its only for 20 (my cut is 16 , if you want it in real life amount).
Type of Commission: poetry (though epistles are also included)
Number of commissions done: five
From the commissioner:
I love writing poetry, frankly speaking. I can write a poem between 8 and 19 lines. Provided that the theme has been carefully told by the customer, I will send drafts of my progress as often as I can. I can write in both traditional and non-traditional formats.
So far as traditional are concerned, I am not particularly good with sonnets, but I have a decent assessment of syllable count. I don't follow meter. Having said that, I have written terza rimas, rub'iyaat, villanelle, ottava rima, triolets, blank verse, and quatrain style poetry.
So far as non-traditional formats are concerned, I would like to be told what the approach has to be. I'll follow it to
"I have been extremely busy between full time college and a full time job. Unfortunately, my computer decided to crash so I am reduced to using mu old kindle. Unsurprisingly, it does not like the new additions to the dA site.
I took a hiatus in order to focus on school and work and that until I get a new computer, I will be back, albeit in a limited capacity. When I get a computer, I will start posting new deviations and become more active."
Some Thoughts About Friendship ..."Sweet is the memory of distant friends! Like the mellow rays of the departing sun, it falls tenderly, yet sadly, on the heart."
:::My Secret Friend:::
"True friends stab you in the front."
"A single rose can be my garden... a single friend, my world."
|Critique is such a hard job - but somebody's gotta do it. I for one, am proud of my critiques.|
Unappreciated Works Feature #15The new feature is up now! The works for the month of April 2014 are:fav.me/d7d3jrb - FOR THE CRITIQUES!!! (and you get them as well!)
New Prompt!Hey everyone!fav.me/d7cvxpf - Submit your to the prompt (described in the journal)