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Poetry commissions
By The Sea I Felt The Dripping Whispers by PuzzledHeartBox
A Bleeding Heart Box Called Puzzled by PuzzledHeartBox
World-Inside-Me - The Heart of Serenity by shehrozeameen
thegalleryofevecommission by shehrozeameen
ZieAwsomePrussia commission - Lirena's Exile by shehrozeameen
Provided are poems that I have written in different formats and using varying styles of presentation.  Each one is unique and each one has a semblance of its own.

length can vary between 8 lines and 19 lines. For epics requiring more then 19 line, I will require a detailed storyline about what you require.

themes: epics, melancholia, human nature, poetry, romanticism. No erotica. Dedications can be done. Eulogies can also be arranged.

Bear in mind that I am not a schedule driven poet. You will be notified during the drafting process, so that you can monitor the progress of the poem you commissioned from me.

I can complete one poem at a time.
For any work which you like but want an opinion regarding its nature, understanding, and its presentation.

You will be provided a note containing a detailed analysis over what I thought about the work - only you will be in the knowledge of this critique (unless you ask otherwise).


Successful projects:


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Shehroze Ameen
Artist | Hobbyist | Literature
Hi! :wave: My name is Shehroze Ameen.

I'm at present working in the following groups:

:groups: :iconpoetrynprosewatchers: - Founder - A place where all your :+fav: get exposure. Do give it a look :)

:groups: :iconpoeticalcondition: - Head of the Critique Department - send a :note: whenever if you want to apply as a critic to me or :michel-le-fou: . For more details, see this journal: Critique Department Update: Critic Openings!EDIT: Duties of Critics have been added in this notice. Thanks fernknits for pointing that out. Appreciate it. :)
Hey Everyone! My name's shehrozeameen and I recently became the new Head of the Critique Department of PoeticalCondition.
This was an administrative decision taken by our boss RiseandBe. I'm succeeding NotenSMSK, who started the critique department. A gem of a boss honestly - punctual, very dilligent in his approach, and particular about how the department was being maintained. Suffice to say, life is more than dA in the end.
Me and NotenSMSK keep in touch outside of dA, so rest assured he's doing well and is in good health - but he's become busy post-graduation due to a job and other non-dA related exercises which require his fullest potential. It was a mutual decision from all three sides.
And thus, ladies and gentlemen, I have something big to tell all of you:

:groups: :iconthecritiquables: - Second in Command - a place where you get critique in exchange for critique given to members :heart: . The rules are provided in the unappreciated journal features posted every month. Come on over!

:groups: :iconevery-photo: - Staff Critic (now promoted to Co-founder) - Yes, photography critic as well. :heart: in case you ever have any photographs which you feel require attention or are outstanding, don't hesitate to send me a :note: .

What else.... I love :dalogo:. If you need somebody to :+devwatch:, or need someone to talk to about something, :note: me. but if your serious about progressing forward, I'll do my level best to help you out in any way possible...

Looking forward to what people feel about my works :)


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:new: Hear me :blahblah: / :sing: my poems on Bandcamp or Soundcloud:


:new: Apart from dA, I'm also :typerhappy: in the following writing websites. Cheers. :)

Blogger : vermillionshroudsofmyinnerself…,

I am available for commissions as well (writing mostly :pencil: ). Here's the thumb to my commission details: Commissions OpenName of commissioner: shehrozeameen :iconshehrozeameen:
Type of Commission: poetry (though epistles are also included)
Number of commissions done: five
From the commissioner:
I love writing poetry, frankly speaking. I can write a poem between 8 and 19 lines. Provided that the theme has been carefully told by the customer, I will send drafts of my progress as often as I can. I can write in both traditional and non-traditional formats.
So far as traditional are concerned, I am not particularly good with sonnets, but I have a decent assessment of syllable count. I don't follow meter. Having said that, I have written terza rimas, rub'iyaat, villanelle, ottava rima, triolets, blank verse, and quatrain style poetry.
So far as non-traditional formats are concerned, I would like to be told what the approach has to be. I'll follow it to
and its only for 20 :points: (my cut is 16 :twocents: , if you want it in real life amount).

Don't hesitate to go :typerhappy: when you wind up looking at my works :) Cheers.
So anyway, I have a few updates for everyone :)

Lets start with the big wow that happened recently:

I got a note today from a dA member, and quoting the major parts of it:

"I have been extremely busy between full time college and a full time job. Unfortunately, my computer decided to crash so I am reduced to using mu old kindle. Unsurprisingly, it does not like the new additions to the dA site.

I took a hiatus in order to focus on school and work and that until I get a new computer, I will be back, albeit in a limited capacity. When I get a computer, I will start posting new deviations and become more active."

With that said, those of you who'd like to know who it is... I'll tell you.

Ba-dum, CHING 

its Mordial33 !!!

For those of you wondering who he is:

He's a poet and a fractal artist, but for me he's better known as a poet. As you can see from these above works (which are awe inspiring in their own right to be honest) its going to be a really big deal when he comes back :dummy:

now onto other shlock which has been happening at my end.

The old one's waiting approval from my commissioning party, while the new one - this is for TheGalleryOfEve - has the title and its just going to be made within the span of this week. I've noticed that I tend to be really late with these commissions :( I should quicken the pace!

I have 424 :points: which will be used to help the group :iconthecritiquables: . Speaking of TheCritiquables :

you'll get feedback and there's still time for you to contribute critiques in case you're interested in it. This especially goes out to :icondanielleivanova: - its a good place to start constructive critique and receive constructive critique as well.

Also, any donations given to me will be used to help the group :iconthecritiquables: for now. I was initially considering to use it on :iconpoetrynprosewatchers: but I, being the founder, feel that group's going fine :)

(Although I still have to deal with bloody bastards who join the group then submit their own works even though the front page of the group has a bunny shouting "hey asshole!" and leading them to a "how-to-submit" journal, but I digress :iconpedosmileplz: I'll live).

be sure to check out the prompt (which is linked in this thumb). Its really simple: you have to submit :+fav: poetry and prose to the folder called "prompt - sacrifice" . As you can imagine the prompt is sacrifice.

Here's the real deal:

anyway, now onward to :iconevery-photo:

don't forget to like these photographs :aww: you'll like 'em for sure.

and finally:

a special edition of :iconpoeticalcondition: Critique Department Newsletter. (Wow, its actually covered five issues now - nice :dummy: ).

So anyway, that's more or less from my side. I did a random meme the other day as well, and I got rejected again by another poetry magazine :iconshrugplz: Its posted here, so no worries. With that said, I do want to thank the dA community's literature forum. Interesting that even there I found a troll. No harm done, but God trolls are adorable :aww: PuzzledHeartBox you can adopt him. And name him Trickle.

So, that's about it from my side. Hope y'all are doing well. Take care, and stay happy. Cheers.
So... I won't be uploading any major news today, so I figured to go for something like a meme. borrowed from sakunokishimori .

- Spell your name without vowels
shhrzmn. Sounds likes a special effect from anime - like a Dragon Ball Z hadoken or something.
- Are you single?
- Whats your favorite number?
- What color do you wear most?
... Surprisingly I never thought about that - I wear whatever comes my way to be frank. If its any respite, I wear blue.
- Least favorite color?
... none in particular really. So long as it isn't cheap blazing bright, I'm fine with whatever comes my way.
- Favorite candy?
caramel or dark chocolate.
- Are you happy with your life right now?
I'm satisfied rather than happy. Its going decent, so I'm not complaining.
- Anyone ever said you resemble a celebrity?
- What is your favorite class in school?
Professional Ethics - its the least professional class.
- How do you make money?
Dad's my bank in real life. and :points: here on dA through commissions.
- Who is your best friend?
- Are you outgoing?
In real life, I'm a mixed bag - I can keep a conversation running, I can talk about anything in a general context, so yeah, I'm outgoing to a basic extent.
- One word to describe you?
wayla. Urdu for "a guy with too much free time on his hands spent on his hobby or something".
- Where do you wish you were right now?
Europe - anywhere in Europe.
- Do you have a crush on anyone right now?
Well... I guess so...

Honestly, what's on your mind right now?
Its straight stuff... its stuff... gettit :eyes: eh...
Honestly, have you done something bad today?
I kinda became irritable, although I didn't show it to anyone. I didn't do anything particularly bad today, so I'm not worried.
Honestly, who is the last person you talked to on the phone?
NotenSMSK ... yesterday. Didn't have any calls today.
Honestly, are you jealous of someone right now?
I guess being a bachelor, anything makes you jealous.
Honestly, what makes you mad most of the time?
Being badgered and pushed into doing something. I hate that.
Honestly, do you want to see someone this very moment?
(nodding) yes. I do. More than anything in the world.
Honestly, are you keeping a big secret right now?
In a way.
Honestly, do you have a friend you don't actually like?
I have plenty who count as "friends" and I don't like 'em. They're in real life so there isn't any point mentioning them here. Nor am I going to mention a person from dA because that's just plain trolling. They're merely "+ friends" - nothing more. They don't exist.

What do you do when you're mad?
(sigh) I'm rolling the history tape here:
third grade, I grazed open a kid's ear by tossing a brick in his direction. He's partially deaf because of it. Also in third grade, drilled a hole through my parent's bedroom door using a dining chair.
fourth grade, beat up a girl for being a bitch.
sixth grade, punched a kid on the sternum so hard and so many times, he wasn't able to breathe for two whole hours.
ninth grade, smacked a bitch on the face.
eleventh grade, slapped one of my annoying classmates square on the face, full force.
first year in uni, snapped at a senior batch student in front of his classmates.
between 2010 and 2013... its mostly been, make very sharp and bitter comments, not restrain myself from making rebukes and sarcastically commenting. I turn racist and I curse without any restraints. If its a woman, "bitch" as a word, doesn't matter much - its like the equivalent of a period in sentences.
If pushed further, I slap without feeling any regrets for my action. Or I punch. In the general case, I'm able to hold it back.

What's the worst thing you've done when you were mad?
Personal territory. Lets just say... (deep breath) its a shitty business. I'm not answering this question.
Ever made anyone cry when you were mad?
(nodding) thirty people by my count.

Ever really cried your heart out?
Last year. Probably in May.
Ever cried yourself to sleep?
(nodding) countless times. 
Ever cried on your friend's shoulder?
(shakes head) I haven't had the privilege.
Ever cried over the opposite sex?
I didn't cry on the loss of my grandmother, to be honest. I accepted it as is. With that said, I've cried on the loss of one of my cousins - she was 6 years old and she died in the October 2005 Earthquake in Islamabad (deep breath, cringes) I locked myself up in the wash-room and cried for fifteen minutes. And I had met her only twice in life. :shrug:
Ever cried over the same sex?
The loss of my grandfather.
Do you cry when you get an injury?
(shakes head)
Do certain songs make you cry?
(nodding) yes, they do. The Islander by Nightwish, Nightingale by Yannni, King and Lionheart by Of Monsters and Men, Terra by Glass Kites, Never Letting You Go by Robb Murphy, Hope Leaves by Opeth, Funeral Song by The Rasmus, Salve Regina (A Gregorian Chant by the Benedictine Monks of the Cathedral de Notre Dame - spelled incorrectly, Notre Dame is).
Do certain movies make you cry?
The Old Man and the Sea, The Message, Tin Tin, some Samurai Jack episodes.

Are you usually a happy person?
I show happiness to others. In my own company, its a limited time only - then I just become directed to other things happening in my life.
What makes you the happiest?
Having fun just being me, laughing my ass off and not thinking about anything, and just going out of the house screaming like a wild scoundrel and being a douche.
Does being with your friends make you happy?
Yes. Without any doubt.
Do you believe in yourself?
Hit and miss. 50/50. I do and I don't. I just go ahead and make something work.
Do you wish you were happier?
I'm thankful for what I have.
Is being happy overrated?
Is it a crime if you give permission to a girl to kiss you? If it is, then happiness is overrated. If not, then happiness is overrated.
Can music make you happy?
No doubts there. Although I prefer Nintendo games.

How many times have you had your heart broken?
I have melancholic poems flooding my gallery, does that answer your question?
Have you ever loved someone so much that you'd die for them?
Truth be told - no.
Has anyone besides your friends and family ever said 'I love you'?
Two girls. One was a bitch. One was a confused teenager.

Do you actually hate anyone?
I hate a lot of people. I keep track by making a list.
Have you ever been on a hit list?
I'm on two.
Do you hate George Bush? Why?
Which one? Why would my opinion matter anyway?

Is your self-esteem extremely low?
Its fairly low.
Do you think you're good looking?
(Nodding) I have enough satisfaction with my looks to have narcissistic yearnings. (smiles)
Do you wish you could be someone else?
A woman with big boobs, but the same hypersexual frustrations that I have right now. Heck, I wish I was a woman - would be able to satisfy my thoughts of my alternative universe self being a quintessential slut.

What is your current hair color?
What is your eye color?
Brown. Like tree bark
What is your skin tone?
Light brownish shades.
Current piercings?
Have any tattoos?
Straight hair or curly?

Hugged someone?
A few people.
Been on the phone until the sun came up?
(laughs) (nodding) three times. With said confused teenager.
Laughed so hard you peed in your pants?
Does shitting in one's pants count? Because I've done that... literally...
Laughed so hard you cried?
Four times.
Got in a fight with someone?
(smiles) I have.

Do you get along with your parents?
We get along, yes.... I guess I do, I don't see them deliberately wanting me out of the house anytime soon. And they've been really helpful towards my well being, so I do get along with them.
Do you have mental breakdowns?
I have had mental breakdowns on occasions.

How tall are you?
5ft 9in
How much money do you have on you right now?


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I personally love this haiku - while it is straightforward, its still open to suggestion; still general and abstract enough to be consi...

Critique is such a hard job - but somebody's gotta do it. I for one, am proud of my critiques.

What's the biggest reason for hanging out with me? (Because we all love being selfish sometimes, right?) 

20 deviants said You're a good friend :dummy:
8 deviants said You're a rarity (aren't we all)
5 deviants said Comment :bucktooth:
3 deviants said You're a dumb ass :bucktooth:
3 deviants said You're a good writer
3 deviants said You raise my chances of climbing the dA Literature ladder (plausible)
2 deviants said I'm selecting option six because I have to kill you
2 deviants said You're someone I have a crush on (oh, how very likely indeed)
1 deviant said You're an idiot. Loyal, but still an idiot
No deviants said I'm selecting option five because it means I can bash you :la:


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=Fight alongside you
=Respect you
=Involve you
=Encourage you
= Deserve you
=Save you

Send this to all your friends and me if I'm one.
If you get 4 back you are liked, but if you get 7 back then you are seriously loved
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DanielleIvanova 1 day ago  Hobbyist General Artist
Man, I see your comments everywhere on dA! :wow: 
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DannyMechanist 1 day ago  Hobbyist General Artist
y u no read my works anymore :/
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WhitePlumFragrance 2 days ago  Hobbyist Writer
:hug: you're so kind.
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It has been awhile my friend, I wanted to say hello and thank you for your note. Also that you know my taste in poetry quite well. I always look forward to your suggestions.
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Diluculi 4 days ago  Hobbyist Writer
thank you for the :+fav: ^^
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smallsincerities 4 days ago  Hobbyist Writer
Happy belated birthday! I hope it was amazing, you deserve it! Your enthusiasm on this site, towards everyone, is practically unrivaled, and I feel like I don't thank you enough for it. Good luck in the year to come, and I hope your birthday is even better, next year :D
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Spiritomb1231 5 days ago  Hobbyist Photographer
Happy birthday bro, and best wishes to you! :cake:
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LadyLincoln 5 days ago  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you for collecting, dearheart! :heart:
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Manouilidis 6 days ago  Professional General Artist
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Thanks for the fave :love:
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Have a pleasant birthday my dear brother.
Happy Birthday by Kidetic    
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ArtistKnight332 6 days ago  Hobbyist General Artist
Super Fantastic Golden Platter Cake 3D !!!!Happy Birthday!!!!Super Fantastic Golden Platter Cake 3D Little Pixel Heart 
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LadyLincoln 6 days ago  Hobbyist Writer
Happy birthday :heart:
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Radiant-Intention 6 days ago  Hobbyist Writer
Happy Birthday!!!! :D :cake:
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SereneCyrene 6 days ago  Student General Artist
Happy Birthday!! Pixel Rose Hide Birthday Emote Pixel Rose 
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Eevee1999 6 days ago  Student Writer
Just wanted to stop by and wish you a wonderful birthday! :party: :cake:
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EclecticQuill 6 days ago  Student Writer
Thanks for the gift, I passed it on, but really appreciate it. :)

And Happy Birthday :cake: :)
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ReiReiSerenade 6 days ago  Hobbyist Writer
I would like to wish one of my favorite talented, wonderful, and kind writers a very happy birthday! :heart:Have your cake and eat it too 
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Edges-to-Everything 6 days ago  Hobbyist Writer
A very Happy Birthday to you, Shehroze! :nod:
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GoryBlueCat Apr 13, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hey Sheh! Happy birthday, friend! :3
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Happy Birthday, mate. Have a good one?

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MissKIttyGames101 Apr 13, 2014  New member Hobbyist General Artist
Happy Birthday kitteh! :3
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EwaGladka Apr 13, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Happy Birthday :)
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