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World-Inside-Me  Commission- The Heart of Serenity by shehrozeameen
TheGalleryOfEve Commission by shehrozeameen
ZieAwsomePrussia commission - Lirena's Exile by shehrozeameen
Kai45 Commission - For Wolfheart by shehrozeameen
Lissomer Commission by shehrozeameen
Provided are poems that I have written in different formats and using varying styles of presentation.  Each one is unique and each one has a semblance of its own.

length can vary between 8 lines and 19 lines. For epics requiring more then 19 line, I will require a detailed storyline about what you require.

themes: epics, melancholia, human nature, poetry, romanticism. No erotica. Dedications can be done. Eulogies can also be arranged.

Bear in mind that I am not a schedule driven poet. You will be notified during the drafting process, so that you can monitor the progress of the poem you commissioned from me.

I can complete one poem at a time.

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Shehroze Ameen
Artist | Hobbyist | Literature
Pakistan
Hi! :wave: My name is Shehroze Ameen.

I'm at present working in the following groups:

:groups: :iconpoetrynprosewatchers: - Founder - A place where all your :+fav: get exposure. Do give it a look :)

:groups: :iconpoeticalcondition: - Head of the Critique Department - send a :note: whenever if you want to apply as a critic to me, prettyflour or Michel-le-fou . For more details, see this journal: Critique Department Update: Critic Openings!EDIT: Duties of Critics have been added in this notice. Thanks fernknits for pointing that out. Appreciate it. :)
Hey Everyone! My name's shehrozeameen and I recently became the new Head of the Critique Department of PoeticalCondition.
This was an administrative decision taken by our boss RiseandBe. I'm succeeding NotenSMSK, who started the critique department. A gem of a boss honestly - punctual, very dilligent in his approach, and particular about how the department was being maintained. Suffice to say, life is more than dA in the end.
Me and NotenSMSK keep in touch outside of dA, so rest assured he's doing well and is in good health - but he's become busy post-graduation due to a job and other non-dA related exercises which require his fullest potential. It was a mutual decision from all three sides.
And thus, ladies and gentlemen, I have something big to tell all of you:
WE HAVE OPENNINGS AVAILABLE FOR NEW CRITICS! :nuu: :squee:


:groups: :iconthecritiquables: - Second in Command - a place where you get critique in exchange for critique given to members :heart: . The rules are provided in the unappreciated journal features posted every month. Come on over!

:groups: :iconevery-photo: - Staff Critic (now promoted to Co-founder) - Yes, photography critic as well. :heart: in case you ever have any photographs which you feel require attention or are outstanding, don't hesitate to send me a :note: .

What else.... I love :dalogo:. If you need somebody to :+devwatch:, or need someone to talk to about something, :note: me. but if your serious about progressing forward, I'll do my level best to help you out in any way possible...

Looking forward to what people feel about my works :)

:googleplus: plus.google.com/+ShehrozeAmeen…

:facebook:: www.facebook.com/shehroze.amee…
:twitter: : twitter.com/ShehrozeAmeen̴…

:new: Hear me :blahblah: / :sing: my poems on Bandcamp or Soundcloud:

Soundcloud: soundcloud.com/shehroze-ameen
Bandcamp: shehrozeameen.bandcamp.com

:new: Apart from dA, I'm also :typerhappy: in the following writing websites. Cheers. :)

Blogger : vermilionshroudsofmyinnerself.…, serzhrant.blogspot.com
Wattpad: www.wattpad.com/user/ShehrozeA…
HelloPoetry: www.hellopoetry.com/shehroze-a…

I am available for commissions as well (writing mostly :pencil: ). Here's the thumb to my commission details: Commissions OpenName of commissioner: shehrozeameen :iconshehrozeameen:
Type of Commission: poetry (though epistles are also included)
Number of commissions done: five
 
From the commissioner:
I love writing poetry, frankly speaking. I can write a poem between 8 and 19 lines. Provided that the theme has been carefully told by the customer, I will send drafts of my progress as often as I can. I can write in both traditional and non-traditional formats.
So far as traditional are concerned, I am not particularly good with sonnets, but I have a decent assessment of syllable count. I don't follow meter. Having said that, I have written terza rimas, rub'iyaat, villanelle, ottava rima, triolets, blank verse, and quatrain style poetry.
So far as non-traditional formats are concerned, I would like to be t
and its only for 20 :points: (my cut is 16 :twocents: , if you want it in real life amount).

Don't hesitate to go :typerhappy: when you wind up looking at my works :) Cheers.


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Today I am going to do a special feature for a very dear friend of mine, Laeneris :iconlaeneris:

For those of you who don't know, Laeneris (or super secret agent L. :sherlock: ) is a lovely soul. She loves cats:


3 Kittens by Laeneris

But when she's not describing cats, she's writing. And she writes such... I don't know, but I'm going to do whatever I can to explain how much she means to me as a writer:

L. is the most wonderful writer I have ever come across. And I genuinely mean it. Her character development, her presentation and plots, her indiscriminate honesty, and the bits of light humour which are part and parcel of the composition all flow fluently in my honest opinion. And they are always unique, always enthralling, and they consume a person's attention completely. They are worth every single moment spent in reading.

Among the ones I liked were:



The twist in the end. Priceless. Genuinely Priceless. I loved how this story was able to keep its twist intact, and every time I re-read this work, I'm still in awe. Its original bordering towards ingenious. Give it a read, people. Its worth every single minute. Honestly it is.



Heartwrenchingly gorgeous; although the original was, in my personal opinion, far more blunt, and had a stronger pull. The current one is good for the new reader, but for me, it lacks... something. I don't know. I guess that when she wrote it for the first time and then posted it, it felt true to form. But over the course of time, with editing, it did keep to its storyline (which I personally feel is still good, its still well written, and its just fluid - makes me tear up even with the editing) and it was still the story of a lying girl, but... I don't know, I just feel conflicted with this one.



Hammer for irony, and another hammer for a good protagonist. I just loved the protagonist in this prose. Honestly, it was wonderful - I thought it was wonderful anyway (and my opinion is far better than a lot of other folks out there, so if anyone disagrees they're asses in my opinion). But in all seriousness, the twist in this one, the environment which is described, the slightly cliffhanger ending - I thought it was a really good shot. And I loved every moment spent in reading it.



This was a far far better "dear teen me" than the rest of the crap I read (inclusive of myself, by the way). I liked it because it was raw. Something which was present in "story of a lying girl" but was slowly drifting away from that work. I still think its a well written letter, and I still at times go back to read it. Because more than anything else, I feel bitter when I realize that such a person like L. ... she deserves better. In my honest opinion she really does deserve better. (Although for those who are close to her and converse with her often, they'll know that she's doing really well :) This is just a "the past could have been a shade more fair" sort of comments).



Another one of those "irony of superpowers" stories which I like because it has a soft-hearted bad ass, and the ending was just... slap in the face good. Really good work because of its character development which I give a good rating. I liked it.

Now... what else am I missing?



:clap: After "elliptical" and "story of a lying girl" this one also gets a hammer for brilliance. Lovely work. Honestly, its just plain lovely.

And...















and now for the more adorable sort of works :)





and yeah well... that's more or less what I can say right now... for her deviations.

But her person?

Laeneris I am honestly grateful to you for all your help, support, conversations, and most importantly for being a wonderful person overall. You're wonderful, and for me, you have been a significant part of my life. I am so glad I met you, honestly, and I'm glad you're still here on dA.
God bless you. Honestly.

(And you know who I am Shrug )

A compliment I wrote to her on  DeviantART Compliments #105a-casualaffair you're a fantastic poet and writer in general. I'm sure you will get far as your gallery grows :) And remember that everything takes time~
-PaleAuthor
Thank you shehrozeameen and NotenSMSK for hosting awesome groups like TheCritiquables and PoetrynProseWatchers. You're both amazing writers and critics :D
-PaleAuthor
SilverInkblot is an amazing deviant that tries to help the literature community get what it deserves on dA. She is one of the nicest people I have ever met, and I'm glad I got to meet her
Otakukid1997
You are the nicest boy I know. You have made me even consider myself as a decent person after spending my entire life feeling and thinking otherwise. You have helped me see that not all people are bad and that there are still angels on Earth and our species still has hope thanks to people like you. You are forever denying my comments on how you rock but I promise I wouldn't waste air to lie about that sort of thing.


and...

forum.deviantart.com/community… where I've written with her icon.

forum.deviantart.com/community… another praise. Its with her dev name.

You know why? because her critiques and constructive comments are honstly the best I've ever read. And she's written a lot. Just one example:





And she's also written a few comments and critiques on my works as well. Here's a few:



laeneris.deviantart.com/critiq…

laeneris.deviantart.com/critiq…

laeneris.deviantart.com/critiq…

and one time when I did a commission for her:



And... you know what? This is my way of saying: L. Thank you. Honestly - you've been such a wonderful friend for me. Like a dream come true. really. Every thing that you stand for is in itself a testament to who you are: the sweetest person I've ever met.

Which is where I'd like to end this feature with a translation you provided me:

De zegeningen van de winter worden geteld door de vallende sneeuwvlokjes .
(The blessings of winter are counted by the snowflakes which fall.)

You know why I asked for this translation? becuase you are those snowflakes... those little snowflakes which remind me that life still continues, and there is more waiting for me. :hug: thanks, really. Stay blessed.

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Critiques

Victim of Fashion by MelikeBAt

I usually don't critique that many works but I felt like critiquing this one in particular. For what it is worth, this particular paint...

blending together forever by fotomademoiselle

:iconevery-photo: critique well... not really. For a start, the use of the ripples on a lake/river to represent the forest's reflection in a distorted ...

Critique is such a hard job - but somebody's gotta do it. I for one, am proud of my critiques.

I am serving commissions. Whose up for 'em? 

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2 deviants said Huh?! (shehrozeameen response): :ohnoes:
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2 deviants said (shehrozeameen response) Steal?! No! I cite KathrynODriscoll and Sammur-Amat and NotenSMSK as inspiration for this!!!
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2 deviants said :grump: I am angry at you!
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2 deviants said :jawdrop: the price is too high (Shehrozeameen response): Not to worry, we'll work something out.
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1 deviant said I am :squee:!!! Commissions OpenName of commissioner: shehrozeameen :iconshehrozeameen:
Type of Commission: poetry
Number of commissions done: http://shehrozeameen.deviantart.com/gallery/44327938/commissions
    
From the commissioner:
I love writing poetry, frankly speaking. I can write a poem between 8 and 19 lines. Provided that the theme has been carefully told by the customer, I will send drafts of my progress as often as I can. I can write in both traditional and non-traditional formats.
So far as traditional are concerned, I am not particularly good with sonnets, but I have a decent assessment of syllable count. I don't follow meter. Having said that, I have written terza rimas, rub'iyaat, villanelle, ott
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No deviants said :la: WHERE CAN I APPLY? (Shehrozeameen response): Commissions OpenName of commissioner: shehrozeameen :iconshehrozeameen:
Type of Commission: poetry
Number of commissions done: http://shehrozeameen.deviantart.com/gallery/44327938/commissions
    
From the commissioner:
I love writing poetry, frankly speaking. I can write a poem between 8 and 19 lines. Provided that the theme has been carefully told by the customer, I will send drafts of my progress as often as I can. I can write in both traditional and non-traditional formats.
So far as traditional are concerned, I am not particularly good with sonnets, but I have a decent assessment of syllable count. I don't follow meter. Having said that, I have written terza rimas, rub'iyaat, villanelle, ott
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No deviants said Who'd you steal this from? :stinkeye:

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qwibes Featured By Owner 3 days ago   Writer
Dear Rose,
I think you are an amazing person and an awesome friend.
And I hope you'll find your luck in life, in love.
You deserve the best, for you are the best.
:rose:
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JutsuGal1208 Featured By Owner 4 days ago
THX 4 TEH MENTION!!! :woohoo: :hug: :iconiamhappyplz:
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SaintOfTheDragons Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hey, thanks a ton for getting so many eyes on my lit.
ONCE AGAIN, I'M FOREVER IN YOUR DEBT.
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TubeeDTermund Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks for the gallery add and taking time to look at my poetry.
I know I am still new here and not many people look at mine but you do and you like them.
Again, thank you. It means a lot ^.^
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d-e-l-e-t-e-d Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2014  New member Hobbyist Writer
Thank you for the faves! :huggle:
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InDecentSeas Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks for the favorite and the gallery add, sir.
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Manouilidis Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2014  Professional General Artist
Thank you so much for faving
#098 He Is My Secret Need by Manouilidis
It`s well appreciated :D
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BloodshotInk Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2014
Thanks for the fave
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JutsuGal1208 Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2014
THX 4 TEH FAV!!! :woohoo: :hug: :iconiamhappyplz:
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IrrevocableFate Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2014   Writer
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Diluculi Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
thank you so much for the :+fav: and requesting "Still" for PoetrynProseWatchers!
Have a wonderful week!
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doolhoofd Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2014
I'm not going to comment on any of the deviations in the journal. You can remove mine and please also remove me from the group and the group's gallery.
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chibi4evah Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you for including my poem in your collection! :D Really appreciate it.
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qwibes Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2014   Writer
Hey you :poke:
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bookloverblue Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks for the add/fave.
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Sammur-amat Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2014   General Artist
Bunny Emoji-66 (Thank you arigatou) [V3] for the fave Misc Emoji-13 (Heart) [V1] 
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thanks for the fave~! :iconmoesmileplz: i appreciate it! :3
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Lissomer Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2014   Writer
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BloodshotInk Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2014
Thanks for the favourite!
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Nuzvael Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
Lately, thanks a lot for the fav' on Fane au vent by Nuzvael! :) :heart:
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fotomademoiselle Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you for faving!! <333
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NicholasName Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you for the WATCH! :D 
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BCabiling Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2014
Thanks for the llama badge :)
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bookloverblue Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks once again for the faves.
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Nolannilestheletter Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Hey man, you respond to my Facebook?
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