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Poetry Commission
Specifications: none, unless you would like a specific form to be followed.
Themes: epic, slice of life, stream of consciousness, or historic.

Previous commissions:…

Details need to be provided via note, inclusive of whether they should be based on a drawing of yours, OC belonging to you, or are a dedication.

Deadlines: unless specified, I try finishing my commissions as quickly as possible. They could either take a week (for works which are at least 19 lines) or a month (for works which are greater than 30 lines).

Random stuff which will pop up from time to time goes here

So if I have anything which I feel requires attention, then it will go here :la:


series which I follow

  • Halo
  • Warhammer 40k
  • Berserk
  • Silent Hill
  • Soul Reaver: Legacy of Kain
  • :new: Red vs. Blue


My anime recommendations

  1. Ghost in the Shell 2: Innocence
  2. Ergo Proxy
  3. Shigurui
  4. Devil May Cry
  5. Top wo Nerae! Gunbuster
  6. Jin Roh: The Wolf Brigade
  7. Spirited Away
  8. Afro Samurai and Afro Samurai: Resurrection
  9. Bo-bobo Bobo-bo
  10. Angel Beats
  11. Black Rock Shooter
  12. Akira
  13. Chouyaku Hyakuninisshu: Uta Koi.
  14. Redline
  15. Princess Mononoke
  16. Angel Egg
  17. Akame Ga Kill
  18. Toradora


movies on Youtube which are food for thought

  • Old Man and the Sea by Alexander Putrov
  • D.O.A. (1950 film noir movie)
  • Dementia 13
  • Life in a Day
  • Metropolis (German 1920 movie)
  • The Wizard
  • VH1 documentary: Evolution of Metal (8-9 episodes)

I'm a Metal Head!

I'm a Metal Head! :headbang:

My list, with new additions to follow:

In Flames, At the Gates, Anthrax, Slayer, Judas Priest, Iron Maiden, Battle Beast, Rhapsody of Fire, Symphony X, Dream Theater, 1917, Insanity, Morbid Angel, Cannibal Corpse, Inferner, Blackhour, Spleen Arcana, Megadeth, Sepultura, KoЯn, Mudvyne, Slipknot, Ayreon, Nightwish, Within Temptation, Abaddon Incarnate, Cradle of Filth, Kalmah, Fear Factory, Machine Head, Dragonforce, Mesuggah, Venom, Motörhead, Kreator, Sodom, Trivium, Celtic Frost, Opeth, H.I.M, Shadow Fall, As I Lay Dying, Bleeding Through, Bullet for my Valentine, Marilyn Manson, Pantera, Queensrÿche, Mercyful Fate, Emperor, Savatage, Carcass, Paradise Lost, Saxon, Iced Earth, Children of Bodom, Týr, Eisbrecher, Rammstein, Biohazard, Napalm Death, Exodus, Metal Church, Testament, Pain of Salvation, Apocalyptica, Angel Vivaldi, Anathema, Enslaved, Fleshgod Apocalypse, Beneath the Tides, Beyond Fear, Engel. and Armadura

Other bands which just came along the way: Five Finger Death Punch, Scar Symmetry, Disturbed, Behemoth, All That Remains, 3 Inches of Blood, Necrophagist, Animals as Leaders, The Sword, Death, Sylosis, Gojira, System of A Down, Tool, Steak Number Eight, Otep, Black Sabbath, Epica, Anuryzm, Avenged Sevenfold, Dio, Dimension Zero, Valediction, Twisted Sister, My Dying Bride, Kamelot, Static-X, Persefone, Diablo Swing Orchestra, Ghost, Marduk (Throne of Rats in particular), Wolfchant, Wrathage, Temple in the Sea, Orbit Culture, Alestorm, Iron Reagan, Lithurgy


Shehroze Ameen
Artist | Hobbyist | Literature
Hi! :wave: My name is Shehroze Ameen.

I'm at present working in the following groups:

:groups: :iconpoetrynprosewatchers: - Founder - A place where all your :+fav: get exposure. Do give it a look :)

:groups: :iconpoeticalcondition: - Head of the Critique Department - send a :note: whenever if you want to apply as a critic to me, prettyflour or Michel-le-fou . For more details, see this journal: Critique Department Update: Critic Openings!EDIT: Duties of Critics have been added in this notice. Thanks fernknits for pointing that out. Appreciate it. :)
Hey Everyone! My name's shehrozeameen and I recently became the new Head of the Critique Department of PoeticalCondition.
This was an administrative decision taken by our boss RiseandBe. I'm succeeding NotenSMSK, who started the critique department. A gem of a boss honestly - punctual, very dilligent in his approach, and particular about how the department was being maintained. Suffice to say, life is more than dA in the end.
Me and NotenSMSK keep in touch outside of dA, so rest assured he's doing well and is in good health - but he's become busy post-graduation due to a job and other non-dA related exercises which require his fullest potential. It was a mutual decision from all three sides.
And thus, ladies and gentlemen, I have something big to tell all of you:

:groups: :iconthecritiquables: - Second in Command - a place where you get critique in exchange for critique given to members :heart: . The rules are provided in the unappreciated journal features posted every month. Come on over!

:groups: :iconevery-photo: - Co-Founder (as of 2015 Jan, the Critique department of this group has been closed).

:groups: :iconadepta-librica:

:twitter: :̴…

:new: Hear me :blahblah: / :sing: my poems on Bandcamp or Soundcloud:


I am available for commissions as well (writing mostly :pencil: ). Here's the thumb to my commission details: Commissions OpenName of commissioner: shehrozeameen :iconshehrozeameen:
Type of Commission: poetry
Number of commissions done:
From the commissioner:
I love writing poetry, frankly speaking. I can write a poem between 8 and 19 lines. Provided that the theme has been carefully told by the customer, I will send drafts of my progress as often as I can. I can write in both traditional and non-traditional formats.
So far as traditional are concerned, I am not particularly good with sonnets, but I have a decent assessment of syllable count. I don't follow meter. Having said that, I have written terza rimas, rub'iyaat, villanelle, ott
and its only for 120 :points:.

Don't hesitate to go :typerhappy: when you wind up looking at my works :) Cheers.
Today is August 19th, and now:


I repeat once more:


So, for Prose, the entries I have are:

And for Poetry we have:

There was one more entry for poetry by katamaris4ever which is  ComfortNo matter the pain, those feelings will pass
The struggles endured today
The present of peace will one day be cast
The torment breaks your soul too fast
And thrashes your heart as you lay
No matter the pain, those feelings will pass
The taunting of strangers, with words so crass
The lethal thoughts begging to stay
The present of peace will one day be cast
Anxiety reaches critical mass
Crying for justice, for thieves to pay
No matter the pain, those feelings will pass
Fragile plans shattered by glass
And jeering horses start to bray
The present of peace will one day be cast
One day I hope you find a hope that will last
And keep the brokenhearted believers at bay
No matter the pain, those feelings will pass
The present of peace will one day be cast
. While it does tag deviations in it, there are no comments from this contestant. It does follow some, but not all, of the rules.

1781798 10152023620041263 1102062882 O by shehrozeameen

Yup, the look on the contestant's face is more or less like my pup when she first came to our house. And I would feel bad to not giving a fair trail, therefore...

*Suspense filled drum roll*

Here's what I've had in mind, which will both accomodate this deviation, and also allow the contestants to know how the judging process will work.


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That up there is the judging sheet which will be used for this contest. This is a special shout out to jackgunski , PuzzledHeartBox and Malintra-Shadowmoon . Its only fair that the contestants know what's going to happen in this contest and how it will proceed - in an orderly way.

So for all the contestants who had to spend those countless nights having to balance their real lives with the need to finish their entries and to take part in this venture, congratulations. You've done a good job, you've gotten this far, and now all I can advise you is... well, its not my advice, its her advice:

1614393 10152023618821263 2116286800 O by shehrozeameen

Yup, relax, and wait till the 16th of September when the result sheets will be out. :D :hug: Y'all stay strong, k? You're all awesome.


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DiseasedDoll Featured By Owner 2 days ago  New Deviant Professional Digital Artist
Psst, you know me.
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LadyLincoln Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you for the points and well wishes, dearheart. :heart:
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seraphiclungs Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Oh my gosh, just realized you love metal just as I do! Ahhh~ c:
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Farand Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2015
You write so beautifully, Shehroze! :faint:
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PuzzledHeartBox Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2015
Less youtube = faster loading time, people with a horrible connection will otherwise hate you :la:
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BloodshotInk Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2015
Hey! Thanks for the cake hon :]]] perfect timing :D
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PennedinWhite Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks in return! :heart: 
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bookloverblue Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks for the several faves!
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