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Nur-Thar

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This is a warhammer 40k fanfic, inspired by this work: [link].

Its meant to be a short story, and I did my best to make it as complete as possible. So here you go.

Happy reading :)
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I agree with the previous comments that the formatting is innovative and well put together. As with others, I don't have an extensive knowledge of Warhammer 40k, but the handful of tabletop runs I've done, along with reading some of the related manuals, have given me a rudimentary idea. At least, enough to comprehend the consistencies your work shares with it. You successfully captured, I believe, a haunted feeling that I have gotten from 40k before on occasion, as well as the sense of deep devotion and heart. I know that can sound like a contrast to the zealotry and ruthlessness that is frequently perceived. To me, though, there is still something valuable, even admirable, in this. The joy of a true servant of something/someone starts, and ends, in the heart, and illuminates. This piece was haunting and felt like it was about closure. Not an end. Just closure. Nicely done :)