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In The Beginning There Was Emptiness

But the relentless humans ceased to learn beyond that. There is nothing but emptiness that the vestige of these lands offer. The wind of the elements consumes all who dare to challenge its superiority - its tornado screams of the souls burning from their naive challenge of the formations; the elements also controlled the ground - WHAT GROUND?! WHAT GROUND?! All who stand in the hopes of standing stand only to face the demon awaiting the moment to glorify the fools in their last stand. Fools! Fools!! Stubborn Fools!! Who are they to believe what these vestiges of death are capable of delivering? how can their minuscule thinking be capable of fathoming the power that they can neither foresee nor even come to terms with!! News of their incumbence and incompetence creep through the traces of terrain that form around these dark lands.


WE SHALL CONQUER ALL! WE ARE THE CHOSEN ONES! THE VICEGERANTS OF GOD!!
Correspondents of the Unionist Oligarchy have revealed that the first of ten satellite drones have been launched to investigate a new 'mars like crevice' which, according to the Joint World Ministry of Aerospace Astronomic Taxonomy has called 'M-35-Omega'. No details pertaining to the astronauts or the ship's specifications, or even schedules have been told in complaince with the Global Governance Parity Act. Only the future awaits the results of these experiments. Patrick Fritzgerald, United Ireland-Brittania Broadcasting Conglomerate, New Dublin
Violent demonstrations have broken throughout Neo-Asia over the massacre of seven Chinese and Three Neo-Pak-Indus Astronauts, the latest to be consumed by what has become known to detractors as "New Benghazi", after the massacres at Old Benghazi from where the original riots began. To Date, there have been a death of at least 150 Astronauts from Neo-Asia, the largest for the year
Our research has indicated that this particular speciment of planet can be easily overwhelmed if a shotgun blast of nitrous Benzotriode-5A is injected into its vapor overlayer....
"Who Are They Ruthlessly Massacreing? (WE THE PEOPLE! WE THE PEOPLE!)"
Representatives of the Gaea Oligarch Government stepped in today to monitor the arrest of Dr. Qasim Mubasharulhaq, Dr. Lewis O'Gallagher, Dr. Ho Xing, and Dr. Reiyaku Hagara for fradulent misquoting of results of the previous three decades of research pertaining to "M-35-OMEGA". They represent the last of arrests of the original pioneers of the colonizing project that has, to date, consumed the lives of 1000 astronauts from the two hemispheres, and trillions of Unionist Currents. A statement from their correspondent has declared that the project is finally sealed.

... To what end had they gone in conquering the planes? TO what extent would their blind avarice lead them, into proving that their tombstone is corroding from excessive use?

DO THEY TRUELY THING THEY CAN CONQUER ME!!

They dare to call me by a taxon?! I AM MUSTWA, I AM MUSTWA!!

Now bear witness to my power.

These elements consumed in their superiority, they shiver at my power!!

The elements gather, the vapors vanish, the ground become calm, there is peace.

Soon a powerful chorus follows. And a powerful chorus that spreads through the vacuum of space, infinitely resounding with power far superior than any that they can accept. There are words in this chorus:

YUL TWA O RAHM TE WWUKTAL KEM KHAA

And the elements rise in with the power of the sound

WUAS THEU WOSUT HGUR OR OWUSH

And the elements rise in power

AH AIWOL THWSI USHWOSK THSU

And the elements gather.

The elements gathered together and a powerful collossus took form. It had no shape it had no essence it formed nevertheless. It spread!

AND TWU SOGHW TUSOSHWK

The spread gathered and more elements joined. The elements fought each other. They fought to be a part of this powerful form. The crescendo was taking form

The atoms of the elements resounded in the glorification of this form

They joined and gathered and vortexed and orbitted.

They conjoined their energy and they formed into a bolus.

AND THE BOLUS EXPLODED!!

There was silence. There was tranquility. There was emptiness.

Then a voice of resounding power weeped. It weeped the words of awakening. it weeped the words of my birth.

HAI HAI YA HO RO! HAI HAI YA HO RO!! HAI HAI YA HO RO!! HO RA NI RAAA!

And the elements flowed from the terrain. They joined each other - wave upon wave. and they flowed towards the epicentre where a warphole had formed.

HAI HAI YA HO RO! HAI HAI YA HO RO! HAI HAI YA HO RO! HAI HAI HAI YAA!

And their joining formed the semblance of sanity. it formed a figurable deity. It formed a face.

The face had its features shown. Its sockets formed; its nose formed.  Its hair formed around the creation; its crown of thorns formed; the crown gathered and shone - a vortex of power radiated. The face had a mouth; its form gathered and it formed a lagging chin; the form had a thorax that gulped the emptiness and formed a voice.

UTAL TULE TUE WAASHAK GULAM

And the guardian brought the elements together and made them into one. This one made the ground solid. And the vortex and stars bowed to their obediance - and proved their ineptitude against their master

And the Guardian spoke his first words

OMM... Ommmm... OMMMMAAAAAGAAAAAA

And a power shook the terrain - and mountains formed. Horrible creations they were against their guardian's form.

I AMMMMMM OMMMMMAAAAGGAAAAAAA

And a powerful resonance consumed the planet. and there was finally peace.

And the guardian's flasing eyes saw his world. And the guardian spoke

"I have awoken you, MY CREATOR. Consume this creation of your liking and become the deity of your world"

And the guardian closed his eyes. He gritted, but the teeth had not shown form.

A powerful scream resounded through space - and the stars faded away at the power of the scream, and the vortex would have faded had not a power calmed them. and the elements were calmed.

I was awoken. and I took form. and made this world to my liking.

And I spoke : There shall lie the Argonauts of Alshufran
And the argonauts of alshufran were formed. and their territory was marked.

And I spoke: There shall reside the Argonauts of Rashoolilkhatran
And the argonauts of rashoolilkhatran were formed and their territory was marked.

And I spoke: There shall reside the Argonauts of Yolash
And the argonauts of Yolash were formed and their territory was marked

And I spoke: There shall reside the Argonauts of Øtißan
And the argonauts of Øtißan were formed and their territory was marked.

And Muztwa was formed in my liking and I declared:

"I have granted thee life, Argonauts! Now be at peace. Your world is Yours to Control"

And the argonauts assembled towards me, forming a semicircle. And they bowed. And they arose and spoke with one voice:

"Hearing and Obedience, Guardian of the Plane"

And thus was MUZTWA was formed. and the four argonauts brought life in his liking.

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Here it is - the description of MUZTWA. I had been wondering about what it meant until now. :clap:

This is just a random work based off the works of ~ACKZ-TWISTED-ART more specifically THIS WORK:

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He owns all copyrights to the deviant but I own rights over the description pertaining to "The Guardian of the Plane". And yes, I have informed him that I intend on using his work, which he says is alright.

I do hope everyone enjoys this. Remember though, this may be very dark and somewhat dark for most deviantartists so I do sincerely apologize if you find this deviant a little too dark. There are better places to look for science fiction so if you don't like this you can leave and check elsewhere. If you like this thanks.

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:iconmichel-le-fou:
First of all, I am truly impressed with three main aspects here: the invention of names and languages, which I have noted from dickens until Tolkien and my own adaptation therefrom; and the setting of tone/mood. You are equal to them and growing.i enjoy creating character ID and arranging their a natures. Lately, age and health affect this for me. I wrote a novella using invented language years ago. The heroine was an Aryan princess called Naida and the heroes had their own tongues. Lots of fun! The remainder here made compelling stuff to read. You'll be a pro very soon, I feel it!
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Talk about a "mad" god :lol:
I enjoyed the different letter-types and languages used in the story, it adds extra depth to it.
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*shehrozeameen Jan 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
lol "mad" god. (by the way, spoiler alert, he's MUZTWA).

:) Thank you font faces by dA.
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:iconpuzzledheartbox:
MUZTWA is a mad skippy :lol:
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*shehrozeameen Jan 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
MUZTWA is the planet we go to, and MUZTWA is living... no, he be a scary "helluva gun on wheels" in O'Reiley's opinion.
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You are bringing me in eager anticipation my dear friend.
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*shehrozeameen Jan 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Verily :)

I'll let you know by note, in any case. Don't worry...
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Shadowed, contemplative, richly detailed, and a little schizophrenic, almost. I like it!
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*shehrozeameen Dec 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Ah yes, that's the beauty of this work...

All those adjectives... they sum up what this work is; thank you :)

and yes, its definitely schizophrenic - that's one crazy god in my opinion.
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