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This poem... had so much of a warmth and melancholy that Anathema portrays in its songs, that I cannot bring myself into reading it a second time lest I suffer the harshness of a reality which we cannot understand... but understand anyway...

That's the painful reality that pours out from this poem; I like that, the... razor's edge reality which is perched towards the cold cliff of iron-clad society and freedom of speech and citizenship.

This poem's ending, much like its beginning, was sudden - and that delivered the much needed kick to keep this poem together.

Well Done! Bravo! Bravo!
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divafica Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you so much! :love:

One question - what is Anathemea?
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shehrozeameen Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
*Anathema

Its a band, they're heavily rooted in melancholia and sorrow. They're along the lines of... melodic doom metal, in a way.

Lyrically, you resemble them (they write really good lyrics by the way. Its good stuff).
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divafica Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Oh, good! :D
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shehrozeameen Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:)
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