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A few terminologies:

Nana : Maternal Grandfather
Nani : Maternal Grandmother
Mammo : Maternal Uncle

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My Nana died on Wednesday of this week. Its been hectic ever since. Its 12:50am, night-time, here in Rawalpindi and thus it'll be my first night in his house. Uploaded from there. Oh finished most of it at 7:36am today in the morning.

The sketch is by ~JoyDivision4 and its called "Crashing". Check it from my favorites under the folder "Orbitrium". You'll find it there :)

Hope you like it. Take Care.
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I'm so sorry for the loss, my friend :(

The format makes my head hurt a little- I'm sorry but can each paragraph be spaced individually? And can '(silence)' be "and there was silence" or anything like that because it doesn't quite fit. Plus the dialogues should be their own paragraph to avoid confusion.

This is really heartfellt ans I love the story, but I'm very nitpicky with prose formats because my eyes suck at being eyes which is why I wear glasses.